viernes, 22 de enero de 2010

Activity number 3: Proofreading.

This is the blog I chose to do my proofreading:
http://bellasunny22-sunny.blogspot.com/

Original paragraph

sobre mee !

Hi, there! My name’suanalyn varela but you can call me mily. I’m from Maracaibo, originally. I live in Maracaibo, is la paz. I’m 17 years old and I study social communication ,URBE . My favorite subjects are historia and informarica .

My Correction

About me!
Hi there! My name is Suanalyn Valera but you can call me mily. I´m originally from Maracaibo and I live in La Paz. I´m 17 years old and I study mass communication at URBE. My favorite subjects are history and informatics.

I left her this comment:

Hi sunny, I like your blog, I chose it for an activity the teacher asked us to do. Hope you read this comment, see ya.

viernes, 15 de enero de 2010

Quote

"A man is able to achieve anything he wants, as long as he is willing to give up everything else in return"

I really like that quote, I interpret it as "you are the only person that can limit yourself", if you couldn't achieve something was because you didn't wanted it bad enough or you didn't give enough of yourself to achieve it. In life, many times you have to choose your path, and to give up opportunities and work in order to obtain others, so to obtain something you must be ready to give something in return.

Introduction

My name is Carlos Parraga, I enjoy playing video games and hanging out with my friends, I enjoy English and I like watching TV and movies in english to keep my hearing sharp. I suscribed to "Ingles escritura y redacción" with my friend Juan Diego, whom i know since young. I enjoy english and I hope the english class will be interactive and fun.